Hi YiYi, that's a lovely Rainbow story I liked how you are going to continue to write more. Can't wit to read the rest. Well done. You could you Shwe Shwe to write a story about the rainbow.
Your story is so creative and interesting to read YiYi! Well done. I like the part when you screamed when the storm came. I also liked when the unicorn chased you so you had to run as fast as you could. Good on you for trying to use your full stops at the end of all of your sentences.
Hi YiYi, that's a lovely Rainbow story I liked how you are going to continue to write more. Can't wit to read the rest.
ReplyDeleteWell done. You could you Shwe Shwe to write a story about the rainbow.
Your story is so creative and interesting to read YiYi! Well done. I like the part when you screamed when the storm came. I also liked when the unicorn chased you so you had to run as fast as you could. Good on you for trying to use your full stops at the end of all of your sentences.
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